Sin
Lights
my Way
As I
Enter
Her Garden
the Trysting
Tree
Is Where
We Meet
the Lawn
the Sun
&
She Is
Gone
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Just read dischord. I loved the metaphors, nice work! The piece reminded me of the notion that one cannot achieve redemption without having erred along the way. Mistakes are teachers as long as we let them. To stay in eden forever would be nice but its not particularly human to do so. And we wouldnt have evolved.
Aw just sum thots for ya. Thx for the reads!
-dhb
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I Hope
It Entertained
& Made
you Question
Why.
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